What I learned from my last video and the comments I received was that I needed to be more enthusiastic and should show how apps like cashapp or venmo work which is what I incorporated into my new video.
Nice pitch. explaining how venmo and the other apps worked really pulled your idea into prospective and made it easier to know exactly what your service is going to provide. also better pitch and explanation made your 2nd pitch a whole let better
Great point. I agree with since your first elevator pitch. I believe that there should be few apps that can protect online buyers from scammers. It is not going to be easy but it can at least reduce it. Also, making people that uses cash app to only have few important information about the receivers is also very important.
Great pitch, Sam. The 2nd elevator pitch is always better. I like that you explained exactly what you are offering and who are offering this service to.
Nice pitch. explaining how venmo and the other apps worked really pulled your idea into prospective and made it easier to know exactly what your service is going to provide. also better pitch and explanation made your 2nd pitch a whole let better
ReplyDeleteGreat point. I agree with since your first elevator pitch. I believe that there should be few apps that can protect online buyers from scammers. It is not going to be easy but it can at least reduce it. Also, making people that uses cash app to only have few important information about the receivers is also very important.
ReplyDeleteGreat pitch, Sam. The 2nd elevator pitch is always better. I like that you explained exactly what you are offering and who are offering this service to.
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