All the feedback I received on my 2nd video was all positive so I used the same video because there were no critiques. The 2nd video I thought perfected all the critiques I recieved on the first one, mainly to describe cashapp and venmo more thoroughly.
I think that your video was overall good and doesn't need to be changed much. I do think that your ending was vague and I think you need to ensure that your 3rd party security service will be able to protect their money and information as they use Venmo or Cashapp. I did really like the way you used the phone in your video as a prop. This gives the audience a good visual!
ReplyDeleteI'm going to comment again. I think your video was on point from the start. I like your idea of protecting people that shop online or that use online platforms a lot. I believe that your product is going to be successful nowadays in our society. Also, i will definitely be one of your customers.
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